Carpe Diem Haiku – embrace

you have started

the trickle of unending love

in a tight embrace

~~~~~

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16 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Haiku – embrace

  1. I just told Bjorn that one of my favorite words is embrace because I love hugs but I love the intimacy of “embracing”

    and to start a love with an embrace…oh yes, that’s the best way to begin a love affair for the ages.
    *happy sighs*

  2. Nice haiku you share here. Can I give you a little suggestion? Maybe you can the ‘ a ‘ at the end of phrase one replace it to the beginning of the second phrase … I think that little change will make this haiku better. Well done.

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